First Cut of Draw

This is the first time I've managed to stitch together the scenes and have close to a finished product. This is what I will show to peers and "test" audiences to get a sense of what is good and what needs to be changed. I understand it still needs a considerable amount of work, but I won't go in detail about that in this post, but instead will discuss it after receiving an audience response. One note is that the song at the very end is a place holder for the time being, as it interrupts and ruins the tone! If something doesn't seem polished I have probably already considered it, but I needed to export a clip to evaluate over the holiday :)